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Old November 27, 2012, 02:22 PM
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Originally Posted by SKYMTL View Post
The past few months have quite trying for OCZ. Everything from missed financial targets to rumors of layoffs and class action suits have filled the internet with “news” of their impending doom. Nonetheless, OCZ has still been trucking along and the development of new products has been progressing at a brisk pace. This brings us to the subject of today’s review: the all new Vector SSD series.

Read more here: OCZ Vector 256GB SSD Review
There is a grammar problem in the very first sentence, which you quoted. "The past few months have BEEN quite trying for OCZ."

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This has left OCZ LOOKING (not looks) somewhat flat-footed...
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this new controller has been designed with a high factor OF reliability,...
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Though with starting (get rid of the duplicated word "starting") prices starting as low as $149.99 (dollar sign is missing)...
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OCZ's list included accessories is actually quite impressive
I'm assuming the word "OF" is missing after the word "list".

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but its inclusion in the standard version alongside a 5 year warranty certainly speaks volumes to OCZ renewed commitment...
OCZ should be possessive and the sentence structure overall is awkward.

This is just on the first page so there must be much more but I don't have the time right now to go through it all.
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