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Old January 16, 2008, 09:14 PM
solaris10 solaris10 is offline
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first page, second paragraph, second line: should say "quite", not "quiet"

properly spelling the wrong word doesn't count!!!

second page, first line, should say: "may be", not "maybe"
second page, bottom paragraph: "its", not "it's"
third page, first paragraph: "copper and metal"? copper IS a metal. i assume you meant "copper and aluminum"
ditto for the paragraph under the pics of the copper+"metal" base
page four, second paragraph: should say "allow it to mount to the cooler"
page four, paragraph four: "it does pay..", not "its"

good heavens, i'm less than a third done reading... i'll add more "comments" if you'd like
Nothing's out there. All there is is sea, and birds, and fish. And 20,000 tonnes of crude oil. And a fire. And the part of the ship that the front fell off. But there's nothing else out there - it's a complete void. The environment's perfectly safe.
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